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GoldenShine x GreyOak by the stary stream

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A/N: I would like to state that only a few people MAYBE might know who GreyOak is based off of that is all thank you!

-~lets start!-~
GoldenShine was known for the way she served her Clan even risking her own life to find a herb for them all. GreyOak was known for being a tough tom and an amazing warrior. GreyOak often let his gaze fall on GoldenShine when she didn't notice him and GoldenShine did the same. GreyOak was popular and was buried in the complements of she-cats from every clan, whenever he went to gatherings or when the medicine cats needed a warrior to escort them to other camps for herbs and such. GoldenShine even though a pure TimeClan cat and the leader: LeopardStar's granddaughter was bullied. GreyOak's grandfather was a substitute medicine cat when ever TrueLake left to help another clan thats why he was so popular.

He begin to notice GoldenShine was becoming distant not even talking to him some days. She'd fidget and her tail tip would twitch when they did talk. When he'd wake up her nest was cold like she slept out in the forest. One night he stayed awake and followed her when she left. He knew he was on the right trail for her sweet sent  bathed his tongue every time he drew in air. He stopped blankly when he noticed her sitting by a stream he never saw this stream before though he looked around, come to think of it he never saw anywhere around him before the trees where huge and red and the stream was placed perfectly so it made a pool farther down that reflected the moon. 

She was quiet and GreyOak didn't know what to do. "I know your there GreyOak I can see you...." GreyOak gasped and buried himself further into the bush he was hiding in before coming out. He smiled at her and she smiled back patting the spot beside her with her paw. He walked over instantly his body not doing what his mind told him which was to force her back to camp to get some rest. Sitting beside her he put his paw over hers and gleamed with pride. Just looking at her in the moonlight, with the water gleaming blue illuminating her frame her goldish yellow fur blowing slightly in the breeze that blew. Heck if this was real life with humans you would say the most picture perfect moment ever!

GoldenShine looked at GreyOak his dark green eyes like ferns in a shadow and his brown fur gleam like stars from where they we're sitting. (A/N: *taking picture with camera* oh and yes his eyes are green just like GoldenShine has blue) She blushed at the thought she had, her sitting in the nursery with 4 small kits playing by her paw and GreyOak bringing her prey. "GoldenShine..... I don't know if you like me but I know I-I love you..." GoldenShine jaw almost dropped, out of every cat he could choose he had chosen her. "If you don't like me back that that's fine I'll just go..." He muttered before standing up and was about to turn around only to have GoldenShine lick his forehead "I love you too GreyOak" she said.

He sat back down again putting a paw over hers she rested her head on his shoulder she close her eyes smiling.

"Hey GoldenShine" 
"yes?"
"what do you call this pool?"
"well I"

she he looked up at the moon and stars and back at the pool that reflected them and smiled the whole reason she a cam out here was because of her feelings and the only way she could hide them was and night was the best tine to do that

"well what?"
"the night pool" 
"because...?"
"it reflects the night sky and the time of our love."
"I-I like it"
Title says is all but 

warriors (c) Erin Hunter
Story and cats (c) me
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